Walt: write using descriptive language.
It was a cold morning, and the streets of Chicago were quiet. No one had ventured out of their homes. Everyone was still in bed. Except for Mr Goodwin. He was late. Late for his conference!
As he ran down the street he dropped his pass to get into the conference once he was almost to the entrance of the conference he felt for his pass but he couldn’t find it. So he had to go back the way that he came to track down where he had dropped his pass. Halfway to the hotel he found it but it took him half an hour to find it. So the conference was halfway done. So Mr Goodwin ran as fast as he could and got back to the conference in just 3 minutes and got to the conference really early. Mr Goodwin had thought that he was late but actually he was one hour early so in that hour that he had before the conference. He went and had his very first deep dish pizza. It was delicious and then he headed to the conference.
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