I am a Year 5 learner in rooms 9 and 10 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teachers are Mrs Buchanan and Miss West.
We are using adverbs to begin two sentences about The Duffy Show.
An adverb describes the way that we are doing something.
Excitedly we wait for the show to being.
Loudly the Mandrakes screamed so loud after the show i couldn't hear any thing.
Well done doing this all by yourself Amira.Read the second sentence - do you think that it makes sense? What else needs fixing? A clue, you are missing a capital letter!